When reading your proposal I'm a little confused about your sequence of pictures.
However, it is an interesting capture of the cooking skills or daily life of a college student.
Your first two images are a little off subject, from the rest I feel like you're going for a focus on the guy, however you're focussing on the picture on the wall.
The lighting is also very contrasting in your images. Some are too dark while others, like in 10, 12 and 13 it's very harsh. Try working more with the ISO. There is also a lot of yellow lighting so try and area with more natural light.
I do like how you tried to capture movement when he was packaging the food, try focussing more on the object in movement or at different angles for a more interesting sequence. You can also try moving along with it to make him out of focus.
Overall, I would be interesting in seeing more of what you can capture in his daily life. If you want to keep focussing on food that's great. Keep working with the ISO settings to make the lighting better.
Hi Jada!
ReplyDeleteWhen reading your proposal I'm a little confused about your sequence of pictures.
However, it is an interesting capture of the cooking skills or daily life of a college student.
Your first two images are a little off subject, from the rest I feel like you're going for a focus on the guy, however you're focussing on the picture on the wall.
The lighting is also very contrasting in your images. Some are too dark while others, like in 10, 12 and 13 it's very harsh. Try working more with the ISO. There is also a lot of yellow lighting so try and area with more natural light.
I do like how you tried to capture movement when he was packaging the food, try focussing more on the object in movement or at different angles for a more interesting sequence. You can also try moving along with it to make him out of focus.
Overall, I would be interesting in seeing more of what you can capture in his daily life. If you want to keep focussing on food that's great. Keep working with the ISO settings to make the lighting better.